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Sooray,Your syllabic count is 1 heavy in the first line. The count is as follows:98448Had you uset Twas instead of There was, your wallet would be heaver by 5 clams. But the limerick is fine, nonetheless, and I love the attention it has garnered from other Madman readers.
Sorry, not buying it. One can slur the first two words to make it work. All depends upon how you vocalize it.
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